I can't quite seem to grasp what the idea is.
I don't know what I'm intending to fizz.
There should be some purpose in mind.
There must be some theme I could find.
How about a love that is lost and fled?
How about a conflict coming to a head?
Maybe a journey across a Pazorian sky?
Or something sad to make you cry?
I search my brain and find no land
I surf my soul and it's built on sand
Take away any purpose that I have found
And everything seems so thematically unsound.
But it's all there if you look hard enough
Pseudo poetry a sweaked and swilt with stuff
A remarkable edge of thought
To my conscience I have brought
In theory at least
A desperate feast
It's a dime
For a time
Blest
Rest
Left
Bereft
Sweet, like clear moving water at 10 a.m., after hiking for a few hours, in the Rockies.
ReplyDeleteGood, Julie, I think so, too!
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